5+ a Day by Autymn

Today we made delicious sandwiches with lots of healthy vegetables, ham and tuna. Our healthy vegetables were lettuce, carrot and cucumber. The last ingredient was cheese. In my sandwich were all the ingredients.

My first vegetable was lettuce, then Mrs. Barry had put some tuna on my other piece of bread. The second vegetable I put in my sandwich was the cheese, thirdly was the carrot and cucumber. Lastly Mrs. Ramkolowan had handed out ham to my table, I had put the ham in my sandwich and finally put the other piece on my sandwich. It looked really nice, and BIG.

After I put my sandwich together I had took a bite, it was delicious but really BIG. When I took a bite I could see all the 5 + a day colours, it looked amazing. I hope that we do sandwich making every day and get healthier.

Remember when you eat; eat healthy and try all the 5 + a day colours as they are really delicious.  

Free Sandwich by Jelsma

Today our school went to the hall and we made a sandwich for free. The ingredients were ham, cheese, lettuce, cucumber and carrot. The teacher gave out the food, all the children were noisy.

The food was donated by Pak'n'Save Glen Innes. The sandwich was  good and my friends were acting weird especially Lasalosi.  After that the little kids went back to their class but as for us we had to tidy up, and then Mr Naidoo said, we are going to do a healthy lunch again. 
I can't wait for next week to make a healthy lunch.

Proud of Chloe

We have been learning to write and present our speeches. We had to persuade the audience to think our way. The Olympics was our theme.
The criteria we had to use to write and present our speech included, an introduction, delivery, content and our conclusion.

1)We love doing our speech like the Olympics and our problem and introductions for our speech.
2) We do a lot of work for our speech and lots of our amazing work we have done about speeches.
3) I have been trying hard with my speech. 

I think that I did an amazing job for my speech because I persevered and was true to myself when I said my speech.This is some of the facts I included.
Did you know that in the olden days people called soccer football. How many gold medals that New Zealand won. They won five golden medals.The Olympics can keep us fit. I also added my speech ideas and problems in my speech. I was talking clearly and I think that I did a nice job. 
On Friday we all  went to our school hall to listen to the speeches. Chloe came second and Room 12 was so proud of Chloe and the others that gave speeches.

My Speech by Ana Malia

We have been learning to write and present our speeches. We had to persuade the audience to think our way. The Olympics was our theme.
The criteria we had to use to write and present our speech included, an introduction, delivery, content and our conclusion.
I have learnt to use powerful words in my introduction and also today I have learnt to write interesting writing.

I think that I didn't do well In my speech because I did not put enough information into my introduction. For example I think that I should have used more powerful words and more humour.

I think that my delivery could have been better because my volume was not loud enough and I did not pronunciate my words correctly and I also didn't look comfortable and confident when I stood in front of the class.

I think that I had a good content because I captured the audience's attention. I also used good expressions in my speech and I included my own ideas but I only had one thing that was wrong in my speech I never included facts to support my opinion.

I think that I did very good in my speech and next time I will try to speak louder in speech and I need to try to put more confident into it.I hope next time I will make it to the finally and then win a price.