Monday, 21 September 2015



This week room 12 has been writing about this picture. First we used our senses to see how it will feel being in a trench. We described what we could hear, smell, see and feel. Once we had all our describing words we picked 3 strong words and had to make 3 sentences. After that we had to use our 3 strong sentences to make a paragraph and from a paragraph we were able to write a story.

Here's an excerpt from my writing: The scared soldiers wore their protection and stood behind the sandbags with their survival kit in case they got shot.......

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