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Tuesday 15 September 2015

Trenches swiveled by Asiana



Week 4 is the week where all room 12 students are learning to write 3 sentences for one picture. Here are the three sentences that I have wrote on what the picture looks like.
Trenches swiveled through a mountain in a maze figure - with people crowded upon each other, waiting for the enemy.


“ My heart is getting louder, it almost feels like waiting to get shot. My heart is struggling to work. My heart beats are increasing while time flies by.”


“Protecting my country is something stuck in my head - as I know my family depends on me.”

Hope you enjoyed reading my writing.

2 comments:

  1. Wow impressive writing Asiana, you really take us inside this picture and what they might have been feeling.
    Good work keep it up!

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  2. Wow impressive writing Asiana, you really take us inside this picture and what they might have been feeling.
    Good work keep it up!

    ReplyDelete